Number 1: I have to start with the hard one, don't I?

Describe a person or people you would most like to go on holiday with.

Plan:

• Appeal to the senses
• Use effective, emotive and loaded words
• Variety of punctuation ( ) : ;
• Central metaphor:
• Long and short sentence for effect
• Introduction:
• Paragraph 1:
• Paragraph 2:
• Paragraph 3:
• Paragraph 4:
• Paragraph 5:
• Paragraph 6:
• Conclusion: